My storie's characters' traits

Character-Trait

Jake-Tough,Cool,and Smart. He has the power to control water.
Nike-Fast,Quiet,and Energetic. He can run at the speed of light.
Jordan-Mean,Bad,and Loudmouthed. He can eat through anything.

Sample Chapter of "WindeX"

Expository Writing Lesson #1 Answers

Anecdote- short and amusing or interesting about a real incident or person.


Question #4 Reader's Response:



The detail of her wanting to help the orangutans is that they are the most endangered species.



Question #3 Writer's Response:



The writer did that because then the reader will know why the scientist is saving them.



Question #5 Write Time:

I remembrer a time when I was walking past a dog. I was very afraid of the dog. So when I walked past, it chased me. It chased me all around the block. Now I am not afriad of dogs and I know dogs smell fear.


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My Feature Article 2nd Draft

!CAUTION!
Don't Hit That Child

Hey You! If you a parent or child, you should read on for important information about hitting children. Some people agree that it is okay for parents to hit their children to maintain discipline. If you agree or disagree read the following.

There are many times when parents shouldn't hit their children. "After a beating, the child thinks only about the beating and not the reason." said David Enders, a parent of two. Most parents don't strike their child for a reason and that is unfair.

Some children agree with Mr. Enders about corporal punishment. For example, as said by Ashley Ogunniyi, the oldest of four children "I think it's a bad thing; because it is really hurting the child." "It is good to discipline them but not in a harse way." When Ashley was asked how will she feel if she was abused she replied "If I was abused, I will be disgraced and annoyed."

Questions for Feature Article

1. How do you feel about child abuse?

For A Parent

2. Do you feel its right to strike an child? Why or Why not?

3. Have you ever stroke an child? Why or Why not?

4. How will you feel if you were abused as a child? Why or Why not?

5. Have you seen your friend/sibling be abused as a child? If so, how does that make you feel now?

For A Child

2. Do you feel its right to strike an child? Why or Why not?

3. If you were stricken by a parent, would you strike the parent back? Why or Why not?

4. If you were a parent, will you strike your child if they did something wrong? Why or Why not.

5. Have you seen your friend/sibling be abused? If so, how does that make you feel?

My Homophone Poem

I go into my suite on a real big cruise.
I try to rap, am I realy that whack.
I go onto deck.
I trip, I fall and almost almost crack my back.
I get up and try to make a sandwitch.
I wrap it up and I place on a desk.
I leave my sandwitch and say good bye.
I go to the store and buy a soda.
I come back, and its not there.
I call out "Where are you"
I think for a second and find out what to do.
I drink my soda but it is too sweet.
I go to my room and take a nap.
I wake up and reekreal bad .
I change my clothes and wear a different shirt.
I put on a pair of shoes.
I go outside and eat a nasty pear.
I fall down and go to sleep.
I start my day all over again.

Who can I interview and where can I find information?

If I could interview any two people for my feature article, I would interview a parent and a child.
Here are some links for more of my research:

http://www.helpguide.org/mental/child_abuse_physical_emotional_sexual_neglect.htm

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Child_abuse